Hello, for the summer learning journey we had to make a Haiku poem here is mine that is based on my cat.
Here is my video of my Haiku poem.
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mrs Carney. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Hello, for the summer learning journey we had to make a Haiku poem here is mine that is based on my cat.
Here is my video of my Haiku poem.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Mōrena Benjamin,
ReplyDeleteIt’s Charlotte here, a commenter for the Manaiakalani Summer Learning Journey. Ka Pai on completing the ‘Summer Haiku Kick-start and Step-it-up’ task!
How did you find this activity? I think that Haiku poems are very interesting and so much fun to write! I like that they are quite short poems because it means you can put much more time into describing words and making the haiku amazing. Did you know that they originated in Japan?
That cat is so cute! Is that a picture of your cat at home? What is his/her name? Do you have any other pets? I only have one dog, her name is Amy.
I notice you left a question for your readers at the bottom of your post. If I was going to write a haiku it would probably be about nature or the beach, this is because I love spending time outside!
Keep up the fantastic blogging!
Ngā mihi nui
Charlotte
Summer Learning Journey