I have been using pobble 365 again this time I wrote a bout Giants.
We have three teams left in the final who will win this last round of the giants world cup. From Brazil we have the stomping Giant with 1000 points at the moment. From Spain we have Bigfoot who has 990 points at the moment so is sitting in second place. In third place from New Zealand we have Bean who is very tall and has 985 points.
The final round is to see who can run the fastest round the track six times. Stomping giant in lane one Bigfoot in lane two and Bean in lane three. On your marks get set… Bang the starting gun goes off.
Bean sprints to the front and Bigfoot not far behind they come round to the second edge so they are aloud to come into the first lane with bean way ahead now he has almost finished his first lap Stomping giants thundering round not looking happy because he’s behind he make a huge stroll towards Bigfoot because bigfoots way smaller than the others but still very tall he bends under Bean. Bean gets a huge shock and runs over top of him ( well I don’t know if they run) the earth is shaking they are in the fourth lap now the crowds going wild now.
The fifth lap now they are really going fast( for a giant.) They have been racing for ten minutes now and are almost on their last lap. Stomping giant is in the lead but Bean is trying to get back into the front. Bean goes back to his lane and gets into the lead with 10 centimeters left.
Bigfoot tries to take the lead again but Bean wins that gives him the win. He wins by ten points. He's holding the Gold for New Zealand. Bigfoot comes second so that gives him the silver because he gets 20 points so that leaves stomping giant with Bronze. He only gets 3 points.
Hi Benjamin
ReplyDeleteYou use describing words well in your stories. Stomping giants thundering round paints the picture of the story in the readers mind. Do you like using the story prompts for writing?
Katrina
Hi katrina,
ReplyDeleteYes I love using story prompts for writing I especially like pobble 365 because it's got a picture and then if you still can't think of something you can scroll down and then there is some ways you could start your story.
Benjamin