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Tuesday, May 5, 2020

The New World

Today I used Pobble 365 to get a story starter. I hope you enjoy.

John, Bob and Flynn are all brothers and they were forbidden to go down the mystery lane. But one morning they got to walk to school then when they were passing past mystery lane they saw people looking like witches one of them that was on a broom stick came flying down to them and hissed at them and tempted them to go down the lane to the big red button and hit it.

John whispered to the others asking them if they should go, the others nodded in agreement and sprinted down the lane before their Mother who was going to the shops in the car could see them running towards it. They hit it.

Bob disappeared first then Flynn then finally John. Because John disappeared first he landed straight in front of an evil looking wizard that was looking into a gold ball. He looked up and said that he was expecting them.

Bob asked where they were Then before they could blink the wizard disappeared and a Witch appeared cackling with laughter. She said in a really high pitched voice You have just entered the Wizard and Witches world.

She gave them all a gold ticket and then they appeared in a new world crowded with witches and Wizards learning spells. They walked into a class when a teacher was showing them a spell and they ended up flying and everyone ended up looking like robots.

They flew out a window and went onto the Wizard field where everything looked so different from earth. A Witch that seemed familiar came flying above and gave them things that looked like sticks(but they are actually wands) somethings that look like buckets(but they are called Cauldrons) and some books that teach you spells. Then she told them that they had to go to witch school because they refuse to go to their school on earth.

She shows them to a classroom and they go to the back of the class and listen really carefully. The teacher was teaching them some spells then she asked John if he could do a spell so he decided to one on Flynn and he suddenly disappeared then John tried the spell on Bob and he disappeared Then suddenly the teacher did it on him and they were back on earth.

They looked up and there was Mother looking foriouse the She shouted at them that they had to go home and they weren’t allowed to go anywhere for a year. The only place they were allowed to go was to the school.


1 comment:

  1. Hi Benjamin
    You must really enjoy using Pobble 365 for your story starters as I note its your second story that you have done a great job of building the characters and story line. The story kept me intrigued to the end! I imagine their mother was very worried about where the boys were!
    Katrina

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