Hello for term 4 reading we had some really cool tasks to do. Here is my work for week 1 and 2.
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mrs Carney. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Thursday, October 22, 2020
Thursday, September 10, 2020
Tuesday, August 18, 2020
The present
This is chunk 9 of the present.
The present
1.Inner thought
2.sentence scaffold
3.rhyme
Mum I'm going outside with pup Jake called out to his Mum. Jake opened the door with some help from the pup the sun shone onto the pup and boy. Ca clink, Ca clink, Ca clink that was Jakes crutches hitting the floor (he has crutches because he's only got one and a half feet). Pup runs out so excited to play with his new mate. Pup runs around like a bunny bouncing around in delight. Jake pulls out the red ball and throws it to pup who looks up to see where the ball is going. Jake thought about how much more fun this is compared to playing video games. He walks and follows pup laughing and having a good time.
The Little shoe maker
This week our video was the little shoe maker here is my chunk. It is chunk 8.
Coordinating conjunction
Include a bracket
Use a simile
Adverbial phrase
Mr Ripout’s eyes were bulging with glee and his mouth was gaping. Mr Botte headed to the door of his shop, looking frustrated. Meanwhile Mr Ripout starts showing off with his new shoes. ROAR!! The shoes are as loud as a lion. Mr Ripout looks down in fright! Mr Botte turns round in confusion. Mr Ripout runs off into the city with regret. (Wondering if he would ever be able to live in any city for more than two day.) Mr Ripout throws the paper as he runs. It swoops down into Mr Bottes hands. He catches it with one hand and rips it in half. Mr Botte is so joyful, so excited, so amazed that his trick worked. Mr Botte sighs with relief finally he's gone...
Thursday, August 13, 2020
Cybersmart
what do you think is good and bad remember don't tell people your address.