This is chunk 9 of the present.
The present
1.Inner thought
2.sentence scaffold
3.rhyme
Mum I'm going outside with pup Jake called out to his Mum. Jake opened the door with some help from the pup the sun shone onto the pup and boy. Ca clink, Ca clink, Ca clink that was Jakes crutches hitting the floor (he has crutches because he's only got one and a half feet). Pup runs out so excited to play with his new mate. Pup runs around like a bunny bouncing around in delight. Jake pulls out the red ball and throws it to pup who looks up to see where the ball is going. Jake thought about how much more fun this is compared to playing video games. He walks and follows pup laughing and having a good time.
Hi, Benjamin its this is such a good story.I loved how you included what challenges you had to do.Maybe next time highlight the questions in a darker colour buts that's just me
ReplyDelete-Karter
Hi, Benjamin WOW that story was so good I like how you colours to represent your challenges. This reminds me about how I also writed about the story. this might help you (it depends) Highlight the Challenges so it much easier to read.
ReplyDelete-Liam