This week our video was the little shoe maker here is my chunk. It is chunk 8.
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Mr Ripout’s eyes were bulging with glee and his mouth was gaping. Mr Botte headed to the door of his shop, looking frustrated. Meanwhile Mr Ripout starts showing off with his new shoes. ROAR!! The shoes are as loud as a lion. Mr Ripout looks down in fright! Mr Botte turns round in confusion. Mr Ripout runs off into the city with regret. (Wondering if he would ever be able to live in any city for more than two day.) Mr Ripout throws the paper as he runs. It swoops down into Mr Bottes hands. He catches it with one hand and rips it in half. Mr Botte is so joyful, so excited, so amazed that his trick worked. Mr Botte sighs with relief finally he's gone...
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