Hello, Today I did the weather task here is my work. Link
What do you think I could have added?
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mrs Carney. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia Ora Benjamin,
ReplyDeleteIt’s Charlotte here, a blog commenter for Manaiakalani. WOW nice work on the Sun, Wind, Rain? Kick Start and Step it up activities!
I really enjoyed watching your weather update videos! You were able to give us a lot of information in those short videos which was awesome! I also thought that your speaking during the videos was very clear and easy to understand!
I wonder what your favourite weather type is? Do you enjoy it most when it’s sunny? Or when it’s raining? Maybe even something else? My favourite weather type is definitely sunny because I love spending time at the beach under a sunny sky!
Ngā Mihi Nui
Charlotte Visser
Summer Learning Journey
Hello Charlotte,
ReplyDeleteMy favourite is sunny because I can go to the beach and play cricket which is my favourite.
Thanks Benjamin
Kia ora Benjamin,
ReplyDeleteIt’s Fiona from the Manaiakalani team. It is great to see you having a go at this weather task.
I think you have done a great job of creating this slide presentation and video links to show what the weather was like at different points during the day. I like the way you have included a suggestion about how many layers to wear to suit the weather. What did you use to measure the temperature?
Keep up the good work. I’m looking forward to seeing more great mahi from you during the summer learning journey.
Ngā mihi,
Fiona Waugh
Hello Fiona,
ReplyDeleteI got the idea of the suggestion of the clothing from 1 news. I used my Mums phone for this.
Thanks Benjamin