Hello, Today I did the kiwi kids news challenge here is my recording. I was unable to link it up to my blog here is my work. Link to recording
What do you think I could have added?
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mrs Carney. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Hello, Today I did the kiwi kids news challenge here is my recording. I was unable to link it up to my blog here is my work. Link to recording
What do you think I could have added?
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia Ora Benjamin,
ReplyDeleteIt’s Charlotte here, a blog commenter for Manaiakalani. Ka Pai on your work on the ‘Summer News, Kick Start’ activity!
Unfortunately I cannot access your recording - when I click your link it takes me to a page and asks me to begin recording my own message! Could you try and re-upload your news recording?
Ngā Mihi Nui
Charlotte Visser
Summer Learning Journey