Hello, Today I did the music challenge here is my work. It had to be a metaphor song using weather.
What would your verse be?
Wednesday, December 29, 2021
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Kia ora Benjamin!
ReplyDeleteIt is Charlotte here from the SLJ commenting team!
Wow!! What a beautiful song verse you have written!!! The rhythm is very nice! How long did it take for you to write that? It is awesome! Do you think you would like to create a music video for it?
Keep up the awesome mahi!!
Ngā mihi nui,
Charlotte :)
Kia Ora
ReplyDeleteBenjamin
My name is Quein and I am a blog commenter for the Manaiakalani Summer Learning Journey. WOW!!! You have done another fantastic job Benjamin. You sang it wonderfully and clearly- Ka Pai!!! We always appreciate and admire the great amount of effort and thought that you put into your work. It is absolutely amazing thank you for sharing this with your fellow bloggers and the SLJ team. It definitely had cool vibes and I really enjoyed the rhythm in your song. It is always a pleasure to see you put a lot of effort into the task and take the initiative. It is Great to see that you were able to utilize and show your creativity with music.
I am curious what inspired your song? I remember when I had to or had to write songs I got a bit of writer's block.
Keep up the Super work we look forward to your next blog post!!!
Ngā mihi,
Quein
Hello Quein,
DeleteThe thing that inspired my song was that the sun makes me happy because I can go out and play a bit of Basketball or cricket outside.
Thanks Benjamin
Kia ora Benjamin
ReplyDeleteAwesome use of metaphors here. You nailed the task. Have you had a look at the "Step it up" to see what else you might be able to manage.
Ngā mihi nui
Deborah