Hello this week for reading we were learning about kauri dieback disease here is my work for this week. I used we video to do my work.
Do you like the way I presented this if not what could I do better?
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mrs Carney. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Hello this week for reading we were learning about kauri dieback disease here is my work for this week. I used we video to do my work.
Do you like the way I presented this if not what could I do better?
Hello here is my writing for the week,
There are beautiful flowers
The amazing smell
In the warm glass houses.
The venus fly traps that eat the flies.
Blooms everywhere you walk.
The tweeting birds that fly everywhere
You see native ones every time you come
There are ducks that splash and dip their heads into the river.
This is a great place to catch up with family and friends.
Children love the playground as well.
It is a very good place to have a picnic or you could have a treat at the cafe
This is my turangawaewae
where is my turangawaewae?