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Wednesday, May 19, 2021

Show not tell

 Hello here is my writing for the week,


There are beautiful flowers

The amazing smell

In the warm glass houses.

The venus fly traps that eat the flies.

Blooms everywhere you walk.



The tweeting birds that fly everywhere 

You see native ones every time you come 

There are ducks that splash and dip their heads into the river.


This is a great place to catch up with family and friends.

Children love the playground as well.

It is a very good place to have a picnic or you could have a treat at the cafe

This is my turangawaewae

where is my turangawaewae?









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