Hello, Today for the summer learning journey we had to make a poem of that was summer so here is my work.
What would your poem go like if you had to make one?
Wednesday, January 20, 2021
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Hey Benjamin,
ReplyDeleteNice work on you poem, you've done a great job. I love all the details you've included, cutting grass, cicadas, barbecue, the sun on your skin. These are all representations of summer. It actually works really well the repetition of some of these ideas; you've got Lawns and BBQs mentioned many times and this helps give the poem a central location and pick apart those ideas.
I hope that made sense. Well done Benjamin,
See you later in the comments,
Daniel