Hello, today for the summer learning journey we had to make a summer sounds poem. Here is my work.
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mrs Carney. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Sunday, January 10, 2021
1 comment:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Mōrena Benjamin
ReplyDeleteMy name is Benjamin too! I’m one of the SLJ commenters :).
Thanks for sharing your lovely poem. It brings to mind many quintessential sounds of summer. Remember, e hoa the difference between there and their!
Were all of the things you mentioned heard from around you at home or was it partly an imagination of different summer sounds?
Some bloggers even included a recording of their environment so we can hear the context of their poem. Would you consider doing that too?
Mā te wā
Benjamin