Hello for writing we are doing narratives here is my story. I hope you enjoy.
One wet stormy night Archie, a young boy and Benjamin(Yeah that's me) decided to go meet Maz,the boat instructor, at the boat. They talked about the conditions for sailing but they went out. They were getting excited because they were going to sail from New Zealand to Alaska.
In the waters beneath them lived and Octopus his name was Octo.
So Benjamin,Archie and Maz, went out onto the boat on a stormy night. The waves were crashing against the boat. The octopus was under the boat and was trying to get to the top of the sea. The boat would not move so he made a huge hole in the boat .
While Maz,Archie and Benjamin were trying to fight the octopus it was starting to get its tentacles round the boat to throw it away. But Maz had an idea he decided to get his Octopus trap/fish net and pull its tentacle back into the water but then they found the huge hole.
Archie and Benjamin start searching frantically to find some wood to find for the hole and Maz starts bailing the water out of the boat. Finally they found the super glue and a big bit of wood and glue the wood back onto the boat.
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