Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mrs Carney. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Thursday, June 25, 2020
Tuesday, June 23, 2020
seal story
Hello I had to do a story about this cute seal. I hope you enjoy my stroy.
It was a Dark night in Antarctica and there was this nice new fluffy snow. In this nice fluffy snow was this white beast. This white beast was lying in the middle of snow it was a seal. The seal's name is Jonathan. He had just come back from hunting so he was full of fish and he is rolling around and moaning because he gulped all of it in one go. He decided to go have another splash around with all his other friends. They decided to play seal infected(their favourite game) guess who won? Yes It was Jonathon the Seal. Good work Jonathon they are about to play their second favourite game seal ball.
Seal ball is where they slide on the Ice and try to header the ball to each other if your header does not make it you are out. Oh OH Oh OH Oh OH Oh OH this is a very close game as usual. One hour later we are up to the final 2 people Jonathon and Carl (Jonathan's best friend). Carless Carl starts he headers it into the water and Jon(short for Jonathon). Jonathan dives into the water and flicks the ball onto the ice and Carless Carl puts his serrated beak to the ball and it pops. Now they cannot see who finishes. But They Decided that Jonathon won.
They are now going to do diving competitions Raph the one who acts like a robot dives in first clunk maybe he wasin´t pretending to be a robot Jonathon thinks he is a robot. Look at Ralph the robot. He's getting really rusty and he's sinking to the bottom. The seals do not know what they should do. Now all the seals do not know what to do should they carry on or stop and try to save the robot?
It was a Dark night in Antarctica and there was this nice new fluffy snow. In this nice fluffy snow was this white beast. This white beast was lying in the middle of snow it was a seal. The seal's name is Jonathan. He had just come back from hunting so he was full of fish and he is rolling around and moaning because he gulped all of it in one go. He decided to go have another splash around with all his other friends. They decided to play seal infected(their favourite game) guess who won? Yes It was Jonathon the Seal. Good work Jonathon they are about to play their second favourite game seal ball.
Seal ball is where they slide on the Ice and try to header the ball to each other if your header does not make it you are out. Oh OH Oh OH Oh OH Oh OH this is a very close game as usual. One hour later we are up to the final 2 people Jonathon and Carl (Jonathan's best friend). Carless Carl starts he headers it into the water and Jon(short for Jonathon). Jonathan dives into the water and flicks the ball onto the ice and Carless Carl puts his serrated beak to the ball and it pops. Now they cannot see who finishes. But They Decided that Jonathon won.
They are now going to do diving competitions Raph the one who acts like a robot dives in first clunk maybe he wasin´t pretending to be a robot Jonathon thinks he is a robot. Look at Ralph the robot. He's getting really rusty and he's sinking to the bottom. The seals do not know what they should do. Now all the seals do not know what to do should they carry on or stop and try to save the robot?
Monday, June 22, 2020
Wednesday, June 17, 2020
Amazing writing
Our learning intention for this week is Use a range of written features to engage the audience.
Tuesday, June 16, 2020
Math boards
Hello this week I did two Math boards here they are.
Do your school do Math boards or something similar?
Do your school do Math boards or something similar?
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