Hello here is my work for today I did the sleeping one.
What do you think of my invention?
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mrs Carney. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Kia ora Benjamin,
ReplyDeleteWow! This is an innovative and creative alarm clock you have invented! I think it's pretty cool. I’m not a morning person so this looks like a fantastic and loud alarm clock that would wake me up!
Did you think of any other ways you would make this or do any tests/drafts?
Would you just have one marble that rolls down to ring the bell once? Or a lot of marbles to ring it lots? I think I would need a lot of marbles to wake me up in the mornings!
Keep up the great mahi!
Ngā mihi,
Lauren