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Tuesday, August 3, 2021

Persuasive writing

 Money can buy happiness 


Firstly money can buy you happiness because you can buy things like sports equipment that you really want. Money helps us achieve our goals, brings us happiness and money also supports the things we care about like our family, education, health care, adventure, fun and entertainment.


Secondly You would also be able to remain quite fit and healthy as you can go to the nearest gym to keep fit.  Do you want to stay healthy? Regular physical activity can help people improve fitness, build strong bones and muscles, control weight, reduce symptoms of anxiety and reduce the risk of developing health conditions such as heart disease.


Thirdly money can get you on a plane to that dream place you have always wanted to go to. Studies show travel does reduce stress. It also improves our ability to handle stress long after we return home. 


In conclusion Money can help us be more healthy,fit and get us the things we want and get to places we want to go.


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